TheLizard Posted February 8, 2008 Report Share Posted February 8, 2008 I’m here in the corner All you have to do is look up Notice me sitting here, smiling foolishly Drinking poison from a lover’s cup It’s like being stabbed with an icicle And I love, no, hate it In the clutches of my own ridiculous desire Despite the hopes that have faded You don’t even know you’re doing it If you lost your ignorance, would you care? These games don’t have any rules About what is right and what is fair Sucked into the scenery Hope you’re happy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Viaene Posted February 8, 2008 Report Share Posted February 8, 2008 you have this particular, undiscribable style which I like Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Laurie_ Posted February 8, 2008 Report Share Posted February 8, 2008 Love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shawna Posted February 8, 2008 Report Share Posted February 8, 2008 Isn't it ironic how the best writing seems to come out of the darkest of vortexes? With this, you have captured what every person who has ever drawn breath on the planet has felt at least once. It's very universal - and yet painfully personal. And you've expressed it so well. I know you're hurting, Tim... and I feel for you. You have such a gift... I hope you're still at it when every day for you is full of smiles. I bet your poetry/songs will be 200 proof then... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Jane 61 Posted February 8, 2008 Report Share Posted February 8, 2008 Love it Tim!! Wish I could get out of my writers block. Trying to write but has been tough. I won't post on here anyway but I just want to get back in the flow of writing. I feel for you Tim. Keep writing, it is the best relief and sometimes even better than friends and family. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rayzor Posted February 10, 2008 Report Share Posted February 10, 2008 Great job TimLizzy! Keep writing, dude, you're good at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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