TheLizard Posted February 4, 2008 Report Share Posted February 4, 2008 Life, liberty, and the pursuit of s hit Imagine that, some people call it happiness I call it s hit It smells like s hit It looks like s hit It is s hit Do with it what you will Paint it, mold it, scatter it It’s still s hit You spend your whole life looking for it Only to find out it all comes from an a sshole Either it’s given to you by an a sshole Or you have to be an a sshole to get it Enjoy your s hit, everyone I’m leaving This will probably get deleted, but in my humble opinion the "Creative Writing" section shouldn't be censored. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tony Baloni Posted February 4, 2008 Report Share Posted February 4, 2008 You said the S word!!! I'm telling Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheLizard Posted February 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2008 There, I added a disclaimer. I'll still be surprised if this is here tomorrow morning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rayzor Posted February 4, 2008 Report Share Posted February 4, 2008 Tim, I know what part of the soul this comes from. I've been there too (unfortunately). I do like the way you say that it can be decorated but it's still crap. And the people who call it happiness, I loved that line. Great work, whether its deleted or not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Viaene Posted February 4, 2008 Report Share Posted February 4, 2008 that's something to think about, I like it. And I support you're opinion about the zero censoring in this section! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jenny Posted February 4, 2008 Report Share Posted February 4, 2008 I think it's great, Tim...good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Jane 61 Posted February 4, 2008 Report Share Posted February 4, 2008 Kudos on this one Tim!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blind-fitter Posted February 4, 2008 Report Share Posted February 4, 2008 PUNK ROCK! I like it. Despite the whiff of s**t and a**-****s, it is quite a breath of fresh air. Tell it how it is, Liz! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shawna Posted February 4, 2008 Report Share Posted February 4, 2008 tim, I think this is fabulous. Sarcasm, irony, and the truth of life all wrapped up in a neat little package. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheLizard Posted February 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2008 Thanks everybody, I think I was trying to emulate Ginsberg or Bukowski with this one. And thanks Mods for leaving it up. PUNK ROCK! Coming from you, that may be one of the best compliments I've ever gotten on here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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