TheLizard Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 Down I go Deep into This rabbit hole Turns out I was wrong This isn’t Wonderland This is my trapped, loathsome mind A voice screams “Off with his brain†So I tune out, but life goes on It’s all out of my hands at this point The muffled sounds are more painful than screams Keep running, keep dreaming, no escape This is reality, not dreams Waking is not an option Could leave them all behind Take the final step Maybe that’s it How selfish Turn it Off Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Levis Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 Hey... look at how it 'looks' ! I'm impressed. And it's not like you broke sentences to get that. It was intentional, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blind-fitter Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 Like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jenny Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 Very good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Jane 61 Posted November 28, 2007 Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 Tim...very cool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheLizard Posted November 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2007 Hey... look at how it 'looks' ! I'm impressed. And it's not like you broke sentences to get that. It was intentional, right? Yes it was. I felt like doing something where I messed with syllables. Glad everyone likes it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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