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  1. Thanks for listening Danielj. I can see where ATC is coming from but yeah listen to the song see if it makes more sense like that. I used to use big words a lot in my songs, not scientific especially but things like incosequential, but it didn't really go with the kind of music we make. Best suited to agsty females such as Alanis Morrissette Thanks for listening anyway. Al
  2. Thanks for having a look. Yeah that 'into to one' is a misprint. Do you think the sounds merging together doesn't fit because of meaning or simply because the words don't seem poetic? Have a listen to the song see if it makes any sense in there. It's basically about digging deep when the world seems to be (or is literally) collapsing around you, you may seem scared at first but heros are so called not because they don't get scared but because they take action regardless of how scared they are. Thanks again, Al
  3. Hi there, not sure if this is ok for this forum but I'd like to ask you nice people what you think of a song of mine called 'When the World Fell Down'. Just click on the link below to hear it: http://www.sims-solos.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/Chester/wtwfd.wma hope you like it. Here are the lyrics: It scares me here, Don?t scare me here Don?t leave me here, to die Underneath the sun, it had all begun in reason Now the time has come for us all to stand aside Chorus When the world fell down, I couldn?t hear you scream out When the world fell down, I didn?t think to listen The voices all turned into to one, the sounds they merged together When the World fell down On me Verse I don?t want to see, what you?d have me believe That beautiful things never last When it all began we would understand the reasons Why we should look to the future not the past Chorus Bridge So catch your breath and look inside if you don?t know what to do Use the powers that you still hide They lie somewhere in you (Somewhere in you) Chorus We're a band called chester and more music can be found on our website at www.chester-online.net It'd be cool to get the opinions of people who have no prior experience of us. Thanks guys, Alex
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