Is this a poem or a song? I dont know anyway tell me what you think.
Digging in the rhyme mine blues
Something is missing, the jigsaws not complete
The structures there, it?s built to run
But it ain?t got no feet
It might not go anyware, but I?m having fun
Who knows could stun!
I could be the one!
Passing time, putting words together
Digging in the rhyme mine
I don?t know what?s missing, but I?ll find it somehow
And if I don?t I?ll make it to the end, anyhow
The TV?s blaring, but its not there
Words are powerful, but so is a bear
Jotting notes, trying to hit a nerve
If I hit it, who knows where this could go!
Looking for the flow
Passing time, putting words together
Digging in the rhyme mine
I don?t know what?s missing, but I?ll find it somehow
And if I don?t I?ll make it to the end, anyhow
Out of shiny green anthologies, it flows like silver and looks so neat
Deeper than a dead mans shoes, Knocks you right of your feat
I wise I had a muse wise of the streets
To show me where it?s at, let me follow her beat
Passing time, putting words together
Digging in the rhyme mine
I don?t know what?s missing, but I?ll find it somehow
And if I don?t I?ll make it to the end, anyhow
Dylan, Ginsberg, The Wolf
T.S Elliot like a Bolt
Catapult, Sting like a Bee, Rock the Boat
Duck
I?m stuck
Hit the wrong note
Running on empty, no coat
Passing time, putting words together
Digging in the rhyme mine
I don?t know what?s missing, but I?ll find it somehow
And if I don?t I?ll make it to the end, anyhow
The end
Hoped you like, if you don?t on your bike!
["oh joker man you know what he wants
but jokerman you dont show any responce"]