Watching as the sun sets across the open sea
I never told you sunsets do strange things to me
Stare across the distance...with my fingers in your hair
Then I turn to kiss you....and you're not there.
...and I'm tongue tied, tongue tied and twisted over you...
...and scared of all the things that we might do.
I'm tongue tied and twisted while you're crying in the night
I know that this feels good...but I know that it's not right...I'm tongue tied and twisted...and scared of all the things that we might lose.
I'm tongue tied and twisted...and I know one of us must choose.
She says 'dreams are full of promises that no-one ever keeps.
They visit you at night....then vanish with your sleep.
Too painful to hang on to
Too precious to release'
What do I do...?
Dive into your ocean.....crash upon your shore?
Dive into your ocean...but, can I swim there anymore...?
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johnyguitar, this song is beautiful, and LEAVE THE LAST VERSE AS IT IS. the only verse that im a bit worried about is the second, as it is a fusion of simple rhyming and cliches, such as the line "I'm tongue tied and twisted...and scared of all the things that we might lose.
I'm tongue tied and twisted...and I know one of us must choose."
but then again, maybe its just me.
but the rest of it is amazing, and dont listen to anybody that puts you down because this song is brilliant.