Ok, how r my lyrics? How can I improve, and what is good about them?
My heart has been sliced
By my souls great chef
Fed to my past loves
I have one piece left
Don’t throw it away
It must be for keeps
I lose this, I’m lost
It’s my final piece
Don’t throw it away
I have been burned black
Even eaten raw
Tossed in the trash can
Before I could thaw
Don’t throw it away
It must be for keeps
I lose this, I’m lost
It’s my final piece
Don’t throw it away
One piece left in me
In my rotting core
I’ll take my chances
The last piece is yours
Don’t throw it away
It must be for keeps
I lose this, I’m lost
It’s my final piece
Don’t throw it away