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Karhul

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  3. Metalheads

    in Creative Writing

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    I understand karhul, some metal is like that but your trying to put a label on all metal heads. I like very heavy metal but i also love classical too :thumbsup:

    If you want to talk to me about it feel free to email me thepinkpill@yahoo.com

    You don't get what I was saying, people here "Mairi" are telling me that I'm not fitting in, so I get a bit upset..... :shades:

  4. A Karhul Creation.

    in Creative Writing

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    I think u should change the last part to still i try, still i wait becuse it rhymes better. But if this poem is about how u are feeling then I think that if this girl is not interested now then she mite never be..sorry :thumbsdown: but other than that good job :happybanana:

    I think it sounds better the way I wrote it, but that's just me. It is about a girl I used to fancy. Her name is in the poem. The first one to tell me the right name wins a prize!!!!. :beatnik:

  7. A Karhul Creation.

    in Creative Writing

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    Not For A Long While.

    Nothing I do will change her mind,

    And everything I do, she doesn't know,

    Days go by and nothing changes,

    I try, I try, she just can't see,

    And I know she cares, she just can't see,

    Kindness and love from me, for free,

    And all she sees is a friend in me,

    Riches of the heart I could give,

    And get something back in return,

    Yonder I wait for a reply,

    Anxiously I talk to her,

    Nothing can put me down,

    Indept converse I can now handle,

    Desire to love, forgotten hate,

    Incomparable humour, I can give,

    Still I wait, still I try.

    What do you think?. :coolio:

  21. What is your favorite song?

    in Music Discussion

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    Either tacos or pizza or stea...oh, favorite song? Sorry, the title wasn't explanitory enough! (To understand the joke, read the first post)

    Right now I'd have to say "Ezy Ryder" by Jimi Hendrix. It's a really great song, and its on a pretty bad CD (Voodoo Soup). It was on one of those CD's put together after his death.

    THE LEGEND LIVES ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:
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