[Dear Daddy]

Its Really very good.But it has some inspiration also.Mean your brother.Nice.Take care and God Bless You.

[poem: shut up]

Its nice and welldone, creativity is a process in which practice is needed a lot, SO keep it up

[It's Up to you]

It's Up to You

One song can spark a moment,

One flower can wake the dream.

One tree can start a forest,

One bird can herald spring.

One smile begins a friendship,

One handclasp lifts a soul.

One star can guide a ship at sea,

One word can frame the goal.

One vote can change a nation,

One sunbeam lights a room.

One candle wipes out darkness,

One laugh will conquer gloom.

One step must start each journey,

One word must start each prayer.

One hope will raise our spirits,

One touch can show you care.

One voice can speak with wisdom,

One heart can know what's true.

One life can make the difference,

You see, IT'S UP TO YOU!

[I love you]

Great Dream, But Dreams are always dreams.Love is not to get something its to give everything.May Be u agree may be u not.But its my own concept.nice well done.

Zimmi

[I am Nothng wihout you]

I am the darkness

You are a light,

I am dull

But you are brightness,

Really, I am nothing without you.

I am alone

But you are not,

I am cold

But you are hot,

Really, I am nothing without you.

I am the Rain

You are a Cloud,

I am the wind

But you are the Direction,

Really, I am nothing without you.

I am shy

You are bold,

When I am annoyed

You are to hold,

Really, I am nothing without you.

[The Mirror]

Very Very good.I liked it, wish best of luck in future.

[A Real Way (zimmi).]

? Hope?

Many pleasant moments

Many pleasant days,

Hope to live alone

But not getting the ways.

Thousands of dreams

Thousands of stars,

All are pleasant

But all are far.

May be I get you

May be I accept you,

After a long time

Could I left you.

There is one way

There is one rope,

To catch the wind

To hold the hope.

One is for me

And one is for you,

I don?t know ur path

But mine is you.

Zaeem Raza. Once Again Posting This.

[Hate my eyes]

Don't lose ur hopes man.Cheer up.Life is full of enjoyment these things are just a little part of it.So enjoy life unless u lose it.Girls are for boys and boys are for girls, Its a fact that every1 will have to realise.Baqi Jaan g,Welldone Keep it up.Take good care of urself.

[Hallelujah - Leonard Cohen]

I think song makes reference to some of the more "Notorious" women in the Bible. Bathsheba, who tempted the king David to kill her husband so he could have her.

[Eventually]

Welldone,

Nice, Keep it up.

[New Kids got run over by a reindeer (parody)]

Keep it up..............

[What is the most depressed/depressing song?]

the man who sold the world (Nirvana).

Bad boyz have all fun

[What is the most depressed/depressing song?]

Hi There,

well done keep it up. ::

[Happy pictures of smiling faces]

Dear ,

its just a wa to show i have joined this site.I should keep in touch with you.Bcas i really need ur hep to improve My English.Thanx.bye.

[Musings]

I aM lITTLE bIT wEAK iN English bUT aLL iS vERY nICE.

Zimmi

[Happy pictures of smiling faces]

I want some smiling faces in pictures.Can be children, girls & boys.But plz don't send Vulgar......

[Flood of Rose Petals]

Hello mike,

All is very pleasent and splendid.Love is like an artist it effaces and educes you.Now jenny's love have effaced and educed ur feelings.well done keep it up.

[Its difficult to catch the waves]

I hope u?ll be fine

Me fine here too

I want to know you, but

its difficult to catch the waves,

I am a little shy

You are a confident guy,but

She always says too

Its difficult to catch the waves,

A story of true love

A love of true hearts

Can?t get the destination,Bcas

Its difficult to catch the waves,

Now a plan to live alone

Not Going inside me

I decided to buy a grave, but

Its difficult to catch the waves.

(Z.Khyal)

[I love you]

I love you

Dear Near Friend of mine

Your love is like a pure wine,

I feel that you are so good to me

And I am the one who try to be,

May be you have some other skills

U can kill a person with these skills,

Me also a brand to kill

Hey plz apply one of the skills,

If I would be die for you

My grave will say I Love You.

( Z.Khyal)

[Love In You]

Dear Mark,

Your effort is really very good and beautiful.Welldone keep it up.

[Stranger inside]

Somedays I wander the streets and feel the cold wind,

pushing me back and I know I have to keep pressing on

Under my breath I mutter a word that I kept to myself,

now nobody can say if they are feeling the same as I do

Mental images projecting on the screen in my mind,

they show me all the people I cannot be in a silouette

I don't know why I say some of the things I say,

sometimes I question my place in society but then I don't

Show me a pair of dice and a place to throw them,

I'll show you a person I don't really know who I am

Smoke rises off the city skyscrapers that appear beyond,

I grasp at reality and yet somewhere there is none

I'll take care of business today and I won't even complain,

I stop for a moment and say hello, hello to the stranger

ALL ARE VERY GOOD :guitar:

[Chop Suey - System of a Down]

You really answered very nicely, alot of humourous.It showed ur intelligency