musicfreak
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In your eyes my dear
Just in your eyes
I see a reflection
Of me, my friend
In your eyes
There is a sadness in your eyes
A tear for each of your years
There is a hate in your eyes
A bitter thing of sour disgust
In your eyes my dear
Just in your eyes
I see a reflection
Of me, my friend
In your eyes
There is a fear in your eyes
Full of panic and total horror
There is a loss in your eyes
A woeful rememberance of long ago
In your eyes my dear
Just in your eyes
I see a reflection
Of me, my friend
In your eyes
There is an anger in your eyes
A red hot fire alive and well
There is a pain in your eyes
The unbearable anguish of time
In your eyes my dear
Just in your eyes
I see a reflection
Of me, my friend
In your eyes
There is an defeat in your eyes
A tired accpetance for all you have
There is a soul behind your eyes
Full of torment and dispare
In your eyes my dear
Just in your eyes
I see a reflection
Of me, my friend
In your eyes
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Yeah, about a friend.
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Don?t give me your hate,
Don?t give me your scorn
Don?t give me your love
Just your promises torn
Torn away from your heart
Torn away from your mind
I?ll always be here for you
I?ll stand against time
Don?t give me your hate
Don?t give me your scorn
Just give me you love
And your promises torn
You can tear me apart
You can take what you find
Do what you came to do
Just don?t steal my rhyme
Don?t give me your hate
Don?t give me your scorn
Don?t give me your love
Just your promises torn
You can hate me if you like
You can scorn me as well
Just don?t love me alright
As your promises die
Don?t give me your hate
Don?t give me your scorn
Don?t give me your love
Just your promises torn
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Pitch black
Damn dark
You don't need to build
No saviors ark
Don't you get it?
Don't you see?
I don't need you
I don't need me
Black flash
Of night
Surviving
Without a light
Don't you get it?
Don't you see?
I don't need you
I don't need me
Good-bye
So long
This will be my
Last song
Don't you get it?
Don't you see?
I don't need you
I don't need me
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I'm sorry you were (or are possibly) feeling low. I feel low alot to...that's why I wrote it.
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Laughter is unheard of here
Don't you know it's only tears
Holding back I feel so low
Swept away and pulled below
Falling fast onto the ground
Silent fears grow all around
Black on black on scarlet red
Here you'll be once you're dead
Silent screams float on by
Silent screams and desprate cries
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Thank you all very much for your statements and compliments. ::
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Thank you Carl.
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Eyes cold and sorry
Face old and woefull
Hand shaking hard
You have become
Your own biggest fear
The thing you idealized yourself as
The thing you will come to hate
With your black and stoney heart
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Just a note on this poem/song. I wrote this awhile I was searching for something to believe in. I still am looking in fact so I posted it.
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We are the ones that fill the street
The faithless in search of faith
We are the ones that no one knows
The hopeless in search of hope
Take the pain away my dearest friend
My lonlieness is killing me
I don't know how to end these thoughts
That torture every bone in me
Please don't catch what I have
It's far to horrid to see
Only take away the pain dear friend
My lonlieness is killing me
We are the ones that fill the street
The faithless in search of faith
We are the ones that no one knows
The hopeless in search of hope
If only I knew what life was about
Then maybe I'd understand
But since I know no more than death
This may be my last stand
This line of thought has gotten me
To plances none too grand
If only I knew what life was about
Then maybe I'd understand
We are the ones that fill the street
The faithless in search of faith
We are the ones who no one knows
The hopeless in search of hope
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This is a great band. They are from the good old USA. They play funk and R&B. I love them.
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I loved "Six Months in a Leaky Boat" as well as "Log Cabin Fever".
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Split Enz is a good group from Australia that my dad introduced me to. They are good though I've only ever heard one of their Albums.
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I love it.