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  1. Dear Daddy

    in Creative Writing

    Posted

    Well I wrote this one at my bros, I dunno what its inspired by, I suppose it has the reverse meaning as ZOE JANE by STAIND but I really dont know...anyways tell me what you think guys...thanks!

    DEAR DADDY:

    Dear Daddy,

    You don?t know me,

    But I remember you

    I can remember the times you?d come home drunk

    I can remember mommy always crying,

    I can remember mommy spending hours masking her bruises,

    Mommy was always strong,

    Mommy never wanted to betray you

    But she went about this wrong?

    You see mommy couldn?t take it anymore

    Instead of leaving you, she left the world

    She couldn?t take your drinking,

    She couldn?t take your abuse

    Now I lay here tonight,

    I mourn the loss of my mother,

    I lay here and I blame you

    It was you and your selfishness

    It was you and you drinking

    It was you and your abuse

    It was you and your cheating

    It was you and your lies!

    It was ALL YOU!

  3. Society

    in Creative Writing

    Posted

    OK, this is my newest one, I took a break from my regular topic of heart break and had a kit-kat! :P no but here it is, enjoy and feedback please!!!!

    SOCIETY

    Sitting here alone, society has won

    By myself society takes its toll

    To be me is not cool

    And to be seen with me is wrong

    Alone for all these days

    By myself society has taken its toll

    Sewn together with lies

    Woven with deception

    Glued together with deceit

    Floored by defeat

    Alone, society has won

    Lost in the image of cool

    I do not fit, a broken fool

    Only friends when others are not around

    Played like a game before tossed to the ground

    By myself society has taken its toll

    ~Marko

  9. Leave me!

    in Creative Writing

    Posted

    Another one of my songs...enjoy :rockon:

    Leave Me

    [Verse 1]

    In the dark of night, I see you here

    In the silence of night, I hear you

    On my tear stained pillow, I bleed you

    Through my fake smile, you know I need you

    {Chorus}

    Leave me, Stop following me

    Leave me, Stop haunting me

    Leave me, Stop stalking me

    Leave me, I need to be free

    [Verse 2]

    I miss the times, we?d walk hand-in-hand

    I miss the hours, you spent in my arms

    I miss the days, when you were mine

    I miss the times, you?d say ?I love you?

    {Chorus}

    Leave me, Stop following me

    Leave me, Stop haunting me

    Leave me, Stop stalking me

    Leave me, I need to be free

    [Verse 3]

    This pain, it?s consuming me

    This silence, its devastating

    This Life, doesn?t feel right

    This world, its all upside down

    {Chorus}

    Leave me, Stop following me

    Leave me, Stop haunting me

    Leave me, Stop stalking me

    Leave me, I need to be free

    ((FADING OUT))

    This pain, it?s consuming me

    This silence, its devastating

  10. Dreaming

    in Creative Writing

    Posted

    Alright, I have fixed it up a bit, changed the first line in the second verse.

    DREAMING

    [Verse 1]

    Since you left, I cannot move on

    I lay here, I cry from dusk till dawn

    I try everyday, Try to understand this

    You come around, wanting to talk

    Why cant you see, there is nothing to talk about

    {Chorus}

    Dreaming is what gets me by, dreaming you never left

    Tonight doesn?t feel right, I need to hold you tight

    Without you I fear, I fear what I?ll become

    Sitting alone, I wonder if you miss me

    Alone I wonder, if we?ll ever be together again

    [Verse 2]

    I cry away today, I guess I?ll cry in tomorrow too

    Nothing seems to change, you haven?t come back

    I close my eyes, wishing you?ll appear

    You never seem to be here, tonight I break into tears

    You?ve placed me away from you, so I guess I?ll never see

    {Chorus}

    Dreaming is what gets me by, dreaming you never left

    Tonight doesn?t feel right, I need to hold you tight

    Without you I fear, I fear what I?ll become

    Sitting alone, I wonder if you miss me

    Alone I wonder, if we?ll ever be together again

    [Verse 3]

    Maybe someday, you can see me walk again

    Right now nothing is fine, I really do need you

    I lost that chance, I don?t know how

    I lost my chance, I don?t know why

    I lost this chance, now I?m crying

    Now I?m dying, and now I?m crying

    Now I?m dying, and now I?m crying

    Now I?m dying, and now I?m crying

  13. Dreaming

    in Creative Writing

    Posted

    Well, this is my newest peice, I would appreciate it if I could get some comments on it...thank you muchly...

    DREAMING

    [Verse 1]

    Since you left, I cannot move on

    I lay here, I cry from dusk till dawn

    I try everyday, Try to understand this

    You come around, wanting to talk

    Why cant you see, there is nothing to talk about

    {Chorus}

    Dreaming is what gets me by, dreaming you never left

    Tonight doesn?t feel right, I need to hold you tight

    Without you I fear, I fear what I?ll become

    Sitting alone, I wonder if you miss me

    Alone I wonder, if we?ll ever be together again

    [Verse 2]

    Monday has come, I still morn this

    Nothing seems to change, you haven?t come back

    I close my eyes, wishing you?ll appear

    You never seem to be here, tonight I break into tears

    You?ve placed me away from you, SO I guess I?ll never see

    {Chorus}

    Dreaming is what gets me by, dreaming you never left

    Tonight doesn?t feel right, I need to hold you tight

    Without you I fear, I fear what I?ll become

    Sitting alone, I wonder if you miss me

    Alone I wonder, if we?ll ever be together again

    [Verse 3]

    Maybe someday, you can see me walk again

    Right now nothing is fine, I really do need you

    I lost that chance, I don?t know how

    I lost my chance, I don?t know why

    I lost this chance, now I?m crying

    Now I?m dying, and now I?m crying

    Now I?m dying, and now I?m crying

    Now I?m dying, and now I?m crying

  14. Left me

    in Creative Writing

    Posted

    Here is my newest peice, still about my break up...

    LEFT ME

    [Verse 1]

    Now I?m left bleeding

    You were so misleading

    Why did you leave this alone?

    Leaving me here to morn

    {Chorus}

    You heart was ice cold

    Now I have to break this mold

    You left me wondering why

    Taking all ability for me to fly

    All I have left to do is cry

    [Verse 2]

    You tore my heart out

    Leaving a hole,

    This is taking its tole

    You took that knife,

    You put it right through

    There is nothing left for me to do

    {Chorus}

    You heart was ice cold

    Now I have to break this mold

    You left me wondering why

    Taking all ability for me to fly

    All I have left to do is cry

    [Verse 3]

    How can you say this is so right?

    When it only feels wrong

    You took me, and you shook me

    I have been sent for a loop

    {Chorus}

    You heart was ice cold

    Now I have to break this mold

    You left me wondering why

    Taking all ability for me to fly

    All I have left to do is cry

    ((Fading out))

    How can you say this is so right?

    When it only feels wrong

    (((REPEAT 2x)))

  18. A happy poem

    in Creative Writing

    Posted

    As for this being the 'FIRST HAPPY SONG EVER HERE' thats wrong...there are many here...here are 2 of mine...

    LOVE IN YOU

    I lay here

    Pieces of me everywhere

    I lay in wait

    In wait of you

    You to love me

    Glancing at a far

    Hoping our eyes will meet

    I see your pain

    I feel your pain

    Do you know I exist?

    Or do you even care?

    I have placed love in you

    Only you shall find it

    For I belong to you

    There is nothing greater then you

    Love is what I longed for,

    Love is what I found in you,

    You are the only one I love!

    Verse 1]

    I've walked through the valley of the shadow of death

    I've felt the pain of losing everything

    I've been pushed towards the gun

    I've been down, I've been kicked, I've been hated

    {Chorus}

    All the pain I've felt,

    all the hate I've felt

    All the anguish I've felt

    campares nothing to the love I have when I hold you tight.

    <<>>

    [Verse 2]

    I hold you in my arms, and I float away, my pain is nothing,

    I am in my own world, my love for you overcomming all pain

    The only thing that is keeping me from falling apart is you love,

    your love is the glue to my heart...

    all my life people have been breaking me down, then you come along and nothing seems to hurt anymore

    {Chorus}

    All the pain I've felt,

    all the hate I've felt

    All the anguish I've felt

    campares nothing to the love I have when I hold you tight.

    <<>>

    [Verse 3]

    All the times people have hated me,

    all the times people have played me down,

    everytime I fall, I hit hard ground...

    now, I hit your love and bounce back to reality.

    {Chorus}

    All the pain I've felt,

    all the hate I've felt

    All the anguish I've felt

    campares nothing to the love I have when I hold you tight.

    this last one may seem grim...but it is telling the person how much I loved them... :guitar:

  25. The Best Lyrics Ever?

    in Music Discussion

    Posted

    I would have to say my opinon of best lyrics ever would have to go to Trapt they are amazing lyrically...imparticularly "Made Of Glass" its my favorite song right now...

    TITLE: Made of Glass

    ARTIST: Trapt

    [sPONSOR]

    I don't know anything at all and I'm somebody else

    It could take years to find you, it could years to find myself

    And I don't need to hear your answer I just need you to see

    That I think it's time to break down these walls that we throw

    Am I still breathing have I lost that feeling

    Am I made of glass 'cause you see right through me

    I don't know who I am and you're the only one who sees that

    I can't ask these questions that cannot be answered today

    And even if everything goes wrong and we start to fall apart

    I will understand where you are, I will understand this by myself

    And I don't need to hear your answer I just need you to feel

    Like there are no boundaries at all

    And how far have we come, too far to throw away the past

    Will you be there waiting for me

    I have to ask what we are, if I ask today it just won't last

    So I'll be here waiting for you

    Will we ever feel this good again - Not today

    Will we ever feel this real

    again - Not today

    Will you ever be mine again - Not today

    Will we ever feel this real again - Not today

    I love this song!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :guitar: :coolio: :drummer: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon:

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