[Burning Cold]

hey guys,

its been a while eh! well I have been writing still, and will continue to do so, I was wondering if yous could comment on my new one please?

BURNING COLD

By day break, I promise I won’t be fake

I take my stand, so take my life with my own hands

So drink tonight your glass of wine,

Cause tomorrow is my time to shine

With my eyes closed, burning cold,

This is the way the mat unrolled

Slow motion as I fall, movement to a crawl,

I could hear your life come to a stall

As I took those pills with that rum,

Yes, I thought of you, and felt like scum,

But it was too late to go back,

I had taken too much flack

With my Eyes burning cold,

This isn’t how it was to unfold

I really did love you, with all my heart,

One chance, one dance, to go back to the start

When I met you, you were the new girl

With a connection, we I give it a whirl

The world always talked down to me,

But you seen me for who I could be,

Now with eyes burning so cold,

It wasn’t the way it was to go,

With my eyes burning cold,

I turn to regret, as I burn cold

[When Times Get Rough]

Hey, Havent posted here in a while, but I thought I'd check and see what the 411 is around here, anyways this is a Song I wrote for my Girlfriend, who is having a rough time these days...This is her favorite, and I hope you all enjoy it also, feedback if you want...

WHEN TIMES GET ROUGH

[Verse 1]

I know, what’s going on in your life is tough,

But, I want to be here for you, to hold you when you’re down,

To be that shoulder you lean on, in times of need,

I want to be the man, who catches you when you fall,

{Chorus}

The world is dark the world is scary,

But darling, it’s going to be all right,

I am here, to catch you when you fall,

Pick you up, when times get rough,

[Verse 2]

I want to be the one for you, the one to hold you tight,

Tell you “I love you†when you feel no ones there for you,

I wish, that in a blink of an eye, I could take everything away,

I wish I could make everything right for you again,

{Chorus}

I know, the world is dark the world is scary,

But darling, it’s going to be all right,

I am here, to catch you when you fall,

Pick you up, when times get rough,

[Verse 3]

Some guys, would up and walk away from you,

But I, I sit here, wondering what more I can do,

Because when I look in your eyes, I see a broken soul,

And it crushes me; I want to see that twinkle back in your eye,

{Chorus}

Darling I know, the world is dark the world is scary,

But darling, it’s going to be all right,

I am here, to catch you when you fall,

Pick you up, when times get rough,

I want to be the one for you,

Throughout this lifetime, I want to hold you,

I want to kiss you, but most of all,

I just want to tell you I love you, on a daily basis,

So darling, if it’s all right, I want to be the one for you!

[New Poems (Thoughts of you, A Reminder, Miss You)]

Hey guys, well I havent posted here in a while...here are 3 of my newest poems for your pleasure of reading...lemme know what ya's think...thanx...

Marko

Thoughts of You

Its two A.M. still sleep hasn?t entered my thoughts

I?m still flowing in a river of your thoughts,

Thoughts of how you smile, when I say, ?I love you?,

Thoughts of the day, you said, ?I love you? for the first time,

Thoughts of you fill the mystic night sky,

Thoughts of you flood my mind,

Thoughts of you flow through me,

Like the wind does through the trees

Its four AM and I have forgotten all about sleep,

Only remembering the night I kissed your cheek,

Thinking of the nights we spent in each other?s company

Thinking of you, here in this lonely night

Its 5 A.M, and I sit here watching the sunrise,

Through its beautiful Purple and Orange glow

I can see you within it, like magic you are here,

It reminds me of your beauty, and grace,

It?s connecting me to you, so I don?t feel so alone today

A Reminder

The birds outside my window,

Sing a sweet melody, it?s a reminder

A reminder of how much I miss you,

And how long you?ve been gone for,

The bird sings its sweet melody,

Like the melodies I can remember,

When you would sing out loud,

I have no choice but to sit and listen,

For I am captivated by your voice

Listening to the birds sing,

Reminds me of your angelic voice,

Reminds me of the way you,

Would captivate me with just one note,

I cannot wait for you to return,

The birds seem to only sing happily

When you?re around,

When your not around, the sun doesn?t shine,

The birds sing the saddest songs,

And inside it pours down rain like a hurricane

Miss You

I close my eyes, wishing that tonight,

You would be here by my side,

It seems you?ve been gone an eternity

So tonight, I sit with my eyes closed

I anxiously a wait the time you can be here,

By my side, where I can feel you,

Breath your beautiful breathes of love

Here where I can see you beautiful face,

I wish there was a star to wish upon tonight

So I can feel your love descend upon me

Where I can whisper I love you into your ear,

And I can see you beautiful smile again

I miss you so much, that words cannot describe

I love you, and I wish upon the stars that you,

Will come back to me here tonight, so I can hold you,

Tonight I live in the stars, when you look up to them,

Hopefully you will feel a connection with me tonight

[BREAKDOWN]

This one I have written for a friend, who is goin thru this particular situation....enjoy ppls

BREAKDOWN

I can feel myself heading towards the breakdown

There is nothing I can do to stop this from happening,

I feel so helpless, and I feel so alone

How am I to see through this?

When all I can see are the problems here

So I spend my days,

Looking for a way to see myself through

I can feel the walls crumbling around me,

I am left alone to wonder who will save me,

When everything falls in around me,

I feel I am left with the crumbled remains,

With no one to run to, and no where to go,

I can feel this; I am heading for a breakdown

I want to run away, run and scream,

Scream at the world, scream at the top of my lungs

I wish I could run from all the problems here

So I never have to face them again,

Because I know I?m heading for a breakdown

What I have done, I feel so terrible,

I want you to see that I feel horrible,

I have hit the low in my life,

I am heading for a breakdown

I don?t want to be, but I cannot help it

My life is heading for the breakdown

Where all the walls will cave in

This breakdown will break-in my walls,

crumbling my life around me,

Leaving me with nothing left to show,

Nothing left to show for my life,

Nothing but the scattered remains,

[TRUE LOVE BLVD]

Well I really dunno what inspired this one...but i do have to say its different from my other songs I have posted here, but its a good enough poem...tell me what you think please....

TRUE LOVE BLVD

Tonight, out for a late night tour

Silence blankets the town,

Off in the distance the silence is broken

Mournful cry of a heart-broken teenager

As I continue down this empty street,

I come to a turn and all the feelings rush back

I have been here before, before I made a wrong turn

I took the dark lonely heartbreak avenue

Finally, I avenge my mistake and proceed straight,

A head is a beckon of hope as I approach this one cautiously

I do not want to end up on the wrong street again,

The street I look for is the one-labeled "True Love Blvd"

It feels like I have been driving for an eternity,

I thought i had found it before, but it was a dead end,

I got lost before at Heart-Break Avenue,

And before this night draws to an end,

I hope to be found on True Love Blvd

Pulling over I ask a kindly citizen for direction,

I take his directions down friendship Drive,

Up to sorrows Street, and across Mourns Bridge,

The green of the street sign brings out

A careful smile, I slow up and take it slowly once again

I am unsure if I can take that kindly citizens direction

For maybe he could have been a pessimist in an optimist body,

Could this man just be one out to bring everyone else down?

Let the sign read "True Love Blvd", I have traveled a lifetime

I have traveled a lifetime to find it, but it could all be for not...

Approaching cautiously, a smirk crosses my face,

I can only make out a few letters...but what they read

Brings hope to me, this could be what I have searched for...

I turn my left-hand signal light on, and make the turn,

The turn to travel down True-Love Blvd.

[TOMORROWS FATE]

This one was written about my Girlfriend and how time is passing so slowly until I get to see her again, and how much I miss her, Enjoy, and plz gimme some feedback, thanx

Tomorrows Fate

What was that, did my heart just skip a beat?

Seems you?ve been gone for an eternity

To be close to you, time, I must defeat

It will be you and me; serenity

Hours from tomorrow, yet it?s far away

Laying here I feel that today will not end,

Alone tonight, tomorrow?s fateful day

Today drags on like a bad cut on the mend

This whole world is growing so dark and cold

Time is passing by so painfully slow

You?re the one who can make this anguish fold

I want dawn to come, and this day to go,

Once the world fades away, and it?s you and I,

We?ll have time to watch the world pass by

[ONLY YOU (Part 2)]

Thanks man, and I will look into changing them and maybe post a revised copy here soon...we'll just have to see how things go... :guitar:

[YOU'RE IMMORTAL]

Thank you!!!

[ONLY YOU (Part 2)]

Well, this one was orginally a song, but I've turned it into a poem...tell me what you think please!!

ONLY YOU

[Verse 1]

Sitting here with precious moments passing by,

Like a cool, gentle ocean breeze

I watch you sleep, not caring for anything

Only you, you look so beautiful

Too angelic for words, I am captivated by you

[Verse 2]

When I have you in my arms

Intangibility seems to fill the air

Every hug I wish would last a lifetime

Every touch I wish would never fade

[Verse 3]

Before I see you my stomach,

It fills with butterflies

My nerves seem to work overtime

But once I see you happiness overwhelms,

The world disappears so I am left alone with yo

[Verse 4]

I stand here before you looking into your eyes,

With these ferocious fears filling my heart,

Inside I coward in fear and my raw emotion steers,

And once I am next to you I float up to cloud nine

[Let's Get Retarded]

The black Eyed Peas had to clean it up and make it "Politically Correct" or else radio stations and T.V stations would not and could not play it on there air ways without facing fines...and that is how it got changed to "STARTED" isntead of "RETARDED"

[YOU'RE IMMORTAL]

here be my newest one, enjoy it was written about my Grandfather...

You're Immortal

[Verse 1]

In every mile I venture into

I model each step after you

In every minute spent in a day

I breathe to one day be like you

{Chorus}

You have been my inspiration

You?ve always been my motivation

I have always idolized you

I?ve done all this because to me you?re Immortal (your Immortal)

[Verse 2]

Within every speech I?ve made

There is your inspiration involved

Every project I have done

You have help with your wisdom

{Chorus}

You have been my inspiration

You?ve always been my motivation

I have always idolized you

I?ve done all this because to me you?re Immortal (your Immortal)

[Verse 3]

In every hockey game I?ve played in

You have always brought out the extra in me

This life I live

Has been inspired by you

You are the immortal one

You will always be?Immortal

[Sad songs that are NOT love songs]

"Beautiful" - THORNLEY Man I love this song!!! on of my favorites, and Thornley is a great band too!

PLUG FOR THORNLEY!!! ::

[ONLY YOU....]

hey, this is my self-proclaimed best...tell me what you guys think....

ONLY YOU

[iNTERLUDE]

If you had a second chance,

At life would you take it?

If you were given another shot

At love would you accept?

[Verse 1]

There aren?t many,

Who get a second chance,

I must be the luckiest,

I have gotten my second chance

{Chorus}

Sitting here with time passing by,

I watch you sleep, not caring for anything

Only you, you look so beautiful

Too angelic for words, I am captivated by you

[Verse 2]

When I have you in my arms

Intangibility seems to fill the air

Every hug I wish would last a lifetime

Every touch I wish would never fade

{Chorus}

Sitting here with time passing by,

I watch you sleep, not caring for anything

Only you, you look so beautiful

Too angelic for words, I am captivated by you

[Verse 3]

Before I see you my stomach,

It fills with butterflies

My nerves seem to work overtime

But once I see you happiness overwhelms

[WE'LL NEVER LOSE TOUCH]

Well, I have written yet another happy song...enjoy Karhul

here ya go...

WE?LL NEVER LOSE TOUCH

[Verse 1]

These last few months, have taken their toll on me

I don?t know why, but you?re the only one who sees

How miserable I was, when you weren?t in my arms

Life it wasn?t the same, it wasn?t a life with out you

{Chorus}

So lets enjoy now, the moment for what it is

We can walk to the stars, so you can pick one out

Lets freeze time, so we can stay here together

We?ll never lose the feeling; we?ll never lose touch

[Verse 2]

Now the cloudiest days, they all seem bright

Every time you come around, butterflies take over

The world disappears, leaving us problem free

When I have you in my arms, life has a meaning

{Chorus}

So lets enjoy now, the moment for what it is

We can walk to the stars, so you can pick one out

Lets freeze time, so we can stay here together

We?ll never lose the feeling; we?ll never lose touch

[Verse 3]

During this moment, I could say I love you

But saying it once, it doesn?t begin to describe it

I could say I love you a million times

And still it won?t begin to describe how much I do

{Chorus}

So lets enjoy now, the moment for what it is

We can walk to the stars, so you can pick one out

Lets freeze time, so we can stay here together

We?ll never lose the feeling; we?ll never lose touch

we?ll never lose touch

we?ll never lose touch

AS ALWAYS FEEDBACK ME PLEASE....

[Sincerity]

That was very good...not too long, where it doesn't flow well anymore...and not to short where it doesn't flow at all...in all...I enjoyed it...

[Your Definite top5.]

1 - "When All is Said and Done" - TRAPT

2 - "Silhouettes" - SMILE EMPTY SOUL

3 - "Always" - SALIVA

4 - "If I Die Tomorrow" - MOTLEY CREW

5 - "She Laughed at Me" - DRIVER

[Songs About Wanting To Be With Someone But Cant..]

"SHE LAUGHED AT ME" - DRIVER

[THIS MUST BE A DREAM]

This is my newest one...it is happier then my others...as my EX wanted me back...so we are now back together...

anyways...comment please!!1 thank you

THIS MUST BE A DREAM

[Verse 1]

I spent the days sad and lonely

I lay in bed wallowing in self-pity

I sat there wanting you to come back

I dreamt you?d be here with me

{Chorus}

The Planets must be aligned

The world must be backwards

I never thought you?d come back

This must be a dream

[Verse 2]

I spent nights wishing on stars

Spent afternoons at wishing wells

Spent mornings wanting you back

Spent evenings looking into the moon

{Chorus}

The Planets must be aligned

The world must be backwards

I never thought you?d come back

This must be a dream

[Verse 3]

You are the light on my path

You are the sun that warms me in the cold

You are the strength that I need to get out of bed

You are the love that I need to carry on

You are my everything (my everything)

[Be yourself - Audioslave]

BE YOURSELF - AUDIOSLAVE...

[everynight]

howdy all, this is my latest peice...tell me what you people think...

EVERYNIGHT

[Verse 1]

This pain its like a dagger,

My heart is empty and stained

The day you left you broke me

I don?t know how to spend the days

{Chorus}

Every night wishing I wouldn?t wake up

Everyday I am tortured by your memory

Everything a reminder of better times

I don?t know how to make it through

[Verse 2]

I had everything I wanted

Everything I needed

The best feeling in the world

Is having you in my arms

The best thing was your love

{Chorus}

Every night wishing I wouldn?t wake up

Everyday I am tortured by your memory

Everything a reminder of better times

[Verse 3]

How could I have loved this much

And still lose in the end

I am so confused I need time to think

I need time to breathe

[Anamnesia]

I live through your wishes. I find my salvation trough your fears.

I thought it was good but that one line... I think it should be "I live through your wishes. I find salvation through your fears." just take out the MY in there and it would sound better... but thats just one mans opinion...

peace out

MARKO

[Always - Bon Jovi]

Anytime, and Welcome to songfacts!

[Always - Bon Jovi]

I do believe this is the song you are lookin for...

TITLE : ALWAYS

ARTIST : BON JOVI

This romeo is bleeding

But you can't see his blood

It's nothing but some feelings

That this old dog kicked up

It's been raining since you left me

Now I'm drowning in the flood

You see I've always been a fighter

But without you I give up

Now I can't sing a love song

Like the way it's meant to be

Well, I guess I'm not that good anymore

But baby, that's just me

And I will love you, baby - Always

And I'll be there forever and a day - Always

I'll be there till the stars don't shine

Till the heavens burst and

The words don't rhyme

And I know when I die, you'll be on my mind

And I'll love you - Always

Now your pictures that you left behind

Are just memories of a different life

Some that made us laugh, some that made us cry

One that made you have to say goodbye

What I'd give to run my fingers through your hair

To touch your lips, to hold you near

When you say your prayers try to understand

I've made mistakes, I'm just a man

When he holds you close, when he pulls you near

When he says the words you've been needing to hear

I'll wish I was him 'cause those words are mine

To say to you till the end of time

Yeah, I will love you baby - Always

And I'll be there forever and a day - Always

If you told me to cry for you

I could

If you told me to die for you

I would

Take a look at my face

There's no price I won't pay

To say these words to you

Well, there ain't no luck

In these loaded dice

But baby if you give me just one more try

We can pack up our old dreams

And our old lives

We'll find a place where the sun still shines

And I will love you, baby - Always

And I'll be there forever and a day - Always

I'll be there till the stars don't shine

Till the heavens burst and

The words don't rhyme

And I know when I die, you'll be on my mind

And I'll love you - Always

[Censorship in Music....]

Well, I am almost done my Essay, when it is done, buffed and polished I shall post it on here for all of you guys to read...thank you all for your input and I have used all of your ideas in some way shape or form...thank you one and all who has posted and I will post the final product in a day or two...

[Good Riddance(Time of Your Life) - Green Day]

Its all about the GREEN DAY in this thread!