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Rayzor
StingRay
08-23-12 06:31 AM - Post#677592    



Many years have gone by
I've longed to see my son
But he's never known me
Though he's my only one

I've not deserted him
Nor has he been taken
It's only in my dreams
And there, I'm mistaken

For I've never held him
As I dream I used to
And he's never touched me
But his eyes I've looked through

Dreams and reality
Begin to play their game
Blending truth with my lies
I'm not sure of his name

Those eyes that I looked through
So distant and forlorn
The most pale shade of blue
For that baby stillborn
Heaven: where you can listen to your favorite tunes forever without distractions.


 
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_Laurie_
Badfisher
08-25-12 11:40 PM - Post#677697    


    In response to Rayzor

I remember finding out about you
Every day my mind is all around you


 
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Lucky
Hot Tuna
08-26-12 08:51 PM - Post#677738    


    In response to _Laurie_

oh
...Naked, singin' on the windmill...


 
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BrilliantDisguise
frog
08-27-12 06:42 PM - Post#677773    


    In response to Lucky

Sad.
"Tramps like us, baby we were born to run..." Bruce Springsteen


 
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Rayzor
StingRay
08-30-12 08:31 AM - Post#677871    


    In response to BrilliantDisguise

I'll make sure not to post devastating stuff like this without warning first, okay? Sorry it hurt. It was well received on 2 other sites and by my housemates who'd read the hard copy. Otherwise I would have posted something else.
Heaven: where you can listen to your favorite tunes forever without distractions.


 
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_Laurie_
Badfisher
08-30-12 05:45 PM - Post#677880    


    In response to Rayzor

Oh don't be sorry Ray....yes it was sad, but so well written that we felt that sadness....we love your work....don't ever be sorry...
I remember finding out about you
Every day my mind is all around you


 
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BrilliantDisguise
frog
08-30-12 07:22 PM - Post#677886    


    In response to _Laurie_

Don't be sorry. You relayed the message very well. It's life...and not all of it is happy.
"Tramps like us, baby we were born to run..." Bruce Springsteen


 
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Lucky
Hot Tuna
09-01-12 10:54 PM - Post#677951    


    In response to BrilliantDisguise

No don't be sorry - you succeeded, you made us feel, and that is the whole point. Sad is ok too. It's good work.
...Naked, singin' on the windmill...


 
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